上次码了一篇关于HSC的,今天码一篇关于音乐的东西。因为除了偶亲爱的俱乐部之外,古典音乐是我很重要的一个爱好了,这篇东西倒是在写作手法上得到了肯定:一颗星,我觉得我这么高超的铺垫应该可以得到☆☆☆☆☆

 

写作要求:运用Devision and Classification的手法来写一篇文章

Topic:My Requirements for a Friend(曾经在课堂上被笑称为征婚启事)

 

 

In my mind, friend is one who never betrays you, and endures for a life time.

 

I have got many requirements for such an ideal friend. The basic rule of the friendship is that I could gain happiness from my friend. I could be myself naturely, and I don't need to be cautious saying something wrong or do something unsuitable. If not so, the friendship will be torture, not enjoyment.

 

Secondly, I could always trust he/she when I meet frustration, and naturely turn to he/she for help(当时居然写成helf,晕,德语是helfen), or find releif. The friend will be a good advisor and use the soft or exciting voice to treat my hurt.

 

The premier requirements is that I could learn a lot from my friend from time to time. A best friend should also be my good teacher or model. Alexandre Dumas Jr. used to leave a famous saying: Real love makes people upwards to progress. What I want to say is that real friendship also has the same effect.

 

With all the requirments above you may think it difficult to find on friend like that, always giving than getting. But I am willing to say I am too lucky to find such a friend, and it is classical music.

上了一个学期的英语写作课,考了试,下学期还有其应用文部分的写作课程。如老师所说这个课是个产出的课,一个学期写了不少,翻翻文章,有些很有感情,很有感觉的3,4篇文章都没有得到肯定,反而几篇我自己不喜欢的东西倒是得到写作手法上的肯定。其实我也知道写作而言未必成功，但是内容是我喜欢的。因为明天要去参加俱乐部年会了,所以先码一篇写HSC的吧:

 

写作要求:注意文章的Unity, Fullness, Coherence和Transition,运用course-effect来写一个paragraph

Topic Sentence(总结句):This is why a lot of research has been done on that.

 

正文:

The synthetic substance and the poisonous chemical of decoration lead to leukemia's soaring. Chemical theropy in treating leukemia has big side-effect, so hemopoietic stem cell transplant is actually a theropy indeed. Since HSC transplant is a new comer to clinical usage, now people have to do a lot of research on both medical field and sociology. In medical field, researchers haven't got enough clinical cases, so they do experiments to gain datas of the patiences' 3-5 yr-livability to compare with HSC transplant, marrow transplant, cord blood transplant and chemical theropy. In sociology's part, researchers try to handle with the high fee of blood sample test and transplant appliances. Besides, hot ot promote HSC transplant to people and change their fixed and wrong notion is also a big task. I've heard that US people confuse HSC into embryonic ones and refuse to donate just like Chinese confuing it with marrow transplant. There are much to do to fertilize the apple in researchers' eye. This is why a lot of research has been done on that.

 

然后老师说，大家要回家好好修改，于是我又改了一下，貌似条理清楚了一些，语病少了些，分了医学领域，社会学领域，以及两者交错领域三块写。外加开头和结尾，虽然违背了写一个paragraph的题目要求，但是我喜欢完整的东西，不完整的话，谁看得懂呢？估计老师就要看不懂，但是我写这个题材就不是为了迁就谁的。写了自己开心不是很好吗？呵呵~

 

People's first impression of the theropy to leukemia is chemical one. Besides it, they may say marrow donation., Actually, hemopoietic stem cell transplant is popular in China nowadays. But HSC tranplant is still a new comer to clinical usage; now people have to do a lot of research on medical field. They did many operations and collected the datas of the patient's 3-5 yr-livability to compare HSC transplant to other types of theropies. On sociology field, researchers focused on clearing up people's misunderstanding. People have wrong notions always refuse to donate their HSC. For example, Chinese conisider HSC transplant as makeing a hole in the bone while American consider it as embryonic stem cell. So many researchers dovoted themselves in finding acceptable ways of propaganda. Research also covers both fields. The blood test fee is very high. How to control the expense is a problem for researchers to think about. On the other hand, how to collect money and attract charity fund is also a task to solve. Researchers' hard working in this test fee really has big effect. All in all, it is urgent to fertilize the apple in researchers' eye. This is why a lot of research has been done on that.

2007.1.15 法律基础

2007.1.16 运筹学

2007.1.17 哲学

2007.1.18 商务英语

2007.1.19 德语

2007.1.23 英语写作 

2007.1.24 国际商法

2007.1.25 会计

    早在17世纪初，在当时关于一个数学对象能从一个形状连续地变到另一个形状的新思想的影响下，法国天文学家开普勒对圆锥曲线的性质作了新的阐述。他发现了圆锥曲线的焦点和离心率，并指明抛物线还有一个在无穷远处的焦点，直线是圆心在无穷远处的圆。从而他第一个掌握了这样的事实：椭圆、抛物线、双曲线、圆，都可以从其中的一个连续地变为另一个，从而辩证地看到了各类圆锥曲线间的关系。

http://www.blog.edu.cn/user1/21864/archives/2005/1022463.shtml

It is hard to imagine that these four totally different types of graph can be changed from one to anther. Since i couldnt copy the graph from the link above, so if you are interested in this topic, you can check the link.

This is my first 2007's blog. Actually, i dont hv much to write these days though i hv got a lot wanna say. In a word, after tough and checkered 2006, i finally got a key of happy life is less expectation, and cherish more.

Today i changed the backgroud music. That is the Ludlows from the movie the Legends of Fall. i hvnt seen the movie, but the music attracks me. There are many versions of this piece of music. i chose the version of London Symphony Orchestra to be bg music.